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My Name Is Ez...

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This is the second of four or five pictures I'm making for :iconzelgodis-graywords: from a Role-Play we did. This is my character meeting his character Ezekiel at the beginning of the story. I love how well I did this, especially on printer paper.

There are two main problems I find in it though. First, this is supposed to be an embracing scene. But to me it looks like my character kneed Ezekiel in the stomach or stabbed him. The only things that take away this idea are the blush marks and my character's gently smiling face on the right. It looks like that because my character is 8"6 and his is 5'2 if I remember right. Also a minor problem is the fishnet shirt, it doesn't look right to me.

Hopefully the 'stabbing in the chest idea' will make a mark on my viewers that maybe it the scene was so shocking that it was like a 'stab of affection'? I really do hope...
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1134x1501px 1.45 MB
Make
EPSON
Model
Stylus NX410
ยฉ 2011 - 2024 Juacamo
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It still looks very nice. If it helps, you could tuck in the shorter character's arm onto the larger one's back to make it less of a 'stabbing'. Don't worry, I read the description so I know what's going on. Still very good work, Juacamo.